miércoles, 14 de mayo de 2014

My vacation Ruined

The bright sun shining in my face as I heard the sound of the waves. it was the perfect day of my life until hear my mom with panic voice, "quickly get your this we are going to the hospital". I was really angry that my vacations were ruined but my sister was more important. Her face was cover in tears and she was in a fetus position. She was moan, “it hurt, it hurt". I was so worried about her.
It all stared in a beautiful day when in a happy voice my parents said," get read kids we are going to the beach".
I had big smile in my face because love the sound of the waves and hot sand in my feet. With exciting voice, “yes, let’s go have fun.” My sister and I put are swimming suit. My parents brought the sunscreen so we do not get burned. I remember that we play all morning in the cold water. Until shouting vice of my mom said, “came back you are too far away.” My sister and I with a grumpy face went back to the shore.
We decided that stead of going again to the cold water, we will tan. With a bossy voice she said, “Go get the bronzer and two towels”.  I got the two towels and she said, “know put them in the floor.”  I was so innocent that I did everything she said.
After a few minutes I wanted to go  back to the water but she said, “No we are going back home because I need to take a shower.” When she told me that my face turned red I felt like I was in fire. I try to say something but my mom said, “You need to go with your sister.” With my arms cross I went back home with her.
When we got home she went to the shower that was outside of the house. I sat on a chair waiting for her to get out. When she finish, she walked towards the front door leaving the floor wet. She put the key in the front door and tries to open it. She could not open it; it was like the door was stuck. After trying for a few minutes I said, “Can I try opening the door”.  She looked me straight in the eyes and said, “No I do not need your help”.  My sister pulled too hard for them key and she slipped on the water. I opened my mouth as she fell to the ground. I being to laugh but then I saw the face of my sister that was in pain and tears falling from her eyes. With a shocking voice a said, “Are you ok?” With pain she answers, “No, I think I broke my arm”.
I enter in panic so I called my mom and as fast as she could she came home. When she got home, she put my sister in the car and took her to the hospital. My sister was in the right thing, she had a broken arm.  My sister ruined my vacation in my favorite place.


1 comentario:

  1. Oh man, sounds like she double ruined your vacation! Love your use of dialogue, this is certainly a strong point in your story. Great job!

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